Week 3

We are writing some really neat stories about Haunted Houses using strong verbs...

Linkon
Hanging people off the roof. Zombies sucking the blood. Bats attacking human beings! Monsters with bomby-knockers and smashing coffins to bits. Destroying windows, doors, anything. Vampires, ghosts and teeth marks all over the floor. There was a glowing light and no-one was in there. Nothing in there. Freaky. The Haunted House.

Ella
Myah, Camryn, Renee, Izzy, Georgia and I tiptoed inside the black, dark, spooky house. Spiders crawling around. Screaming people. Big spiders. Myah, Camryn, Renee, Izzy, Georgia and I went on an elevator. We saw a vampire. He had sharp teeth like a shark. His hair was smooth like fluff. and he had a big, black cape. The vampire had a wardrobe filled with dead people. "Oh no!"

Jack M.
Thundering past the trail of sharp teeth comes the screaming Jack. "Oh no! There's one hundred doors now. What will I do? " Jack said, puzzled. Suddenly, a glowing killer demon jumped in front of Jack. He said "Welcome to Terror Tower". If you don't make it out in time you will DIE!"
You only have one hour to get out o the rotting Terror Tower. Good luck... or maybe... goodbye...whoever you are!"
As the demon left he dropped a piece of paper saying how to get out of Terror Tower. It had mysterious clues like 'it is the number of the age of this house' and he saw another clue. To get out, find the mammal that flies in this house. It guards the number of the right door and the key. Jack said "It's a bat! A vampire bat!" But as Jack said that very word he fell down a trap door...
When he woke up he saw two doors. One door was made of foam, the other one was makde of mini coffins. Jack said "I think it's the coffin door". Jack tiptoed in and he saw a vampire sleeping in his coffin. He was sitting on the key and the right number of the right door! Jack gently reached for the key. He said "I got it!". Jack crept back out, climbed the laddder and ran to the number-79. Just then, the demon appeared and he said "Times up, Mr. Whoever-You-Are!" The demon pulled out his pet vampires. "Get him!" Jack quickly put the key in the lock and raced out the door. Jack loacks the door as fast as he could. "What a horrible night! I'm going home!"